First Whitetail (poem)

[biggamehunter]

In our grade 8 class we had to write a poem this is what I wrote.

My First Whitetail
By: Jake Schutz
The blood in my body was dashing around,
As I pulled the trigger and observed it go down.
She was no more then 30 yards away,
When I shot her with a 20 gauge that day.
We drove in to an oil lease at 11 o’clock.
Went a ways, turned the corner, and saw her walk.
I shot it right in the shoulder,
And it was only mid October.
I whispered in joy,
To my grandpa Lloyd.
Because he was the one that was with me,
On that cold October journey.
Although it was only a female,
I felt like I shot a trophy Whitetail.
When we weighed the meat I was delighted to see,
That I would have 60 lbs of sausage for me.
Yes he was an immense doe,
And I take pride in shooting him a year ago.

[S.A.S]

Nice poem buddy, Glad to see your allowed to be pro hunting in your school. what did you teacher think?

[biggamehunter]

Havnt got the mark yet. I think she liked it

[300savage]

Reminds me of my first deer. If I was marking it I would give an A+

[Walleyes]

Right on young fellow.. Not only a neat poem but its good to see you are not afraid to express yourself in what I know is not an easy environment to do it in.. Well done..

[Rockymtnx]

Great poem there.
Keep up the good writing