[The Fisherman Guy]

I don't think you narrated too much, but everyone likes different things. Some guys like no music, lots of landscape footage, no kill shots vs kill shots etc. Do what feels right for you, if you like it - that's all that matters! It's a good way to document memories for you, not for guys who you've never met - unless you want to film for a living or a very serious hobby. I'm sure you've heard of Popcan, he's got a lot of great footage and editing skills.

Looks like you hunt some incredible country in the rolling forest. Some stock footy of the trees, sunrises and sets, that kind of footage is good to have if you want to backdrop your text frames.

A bamboo pole works good for a go pro mount, it's already camouflaged and provides pretty stable footage when walking. Or getting long panoramic shots. A light tripod works the same when folded up. Bulky though.

Bottom line is: The footage you accumulate means more to you than anyone else as you were there to experience it. Every time you watch it, you'll remember the scene where that footage came from.